Feedback on the music video presention

Samantha's group

they will be doing a performance videos. most of the shots will be close shots. the location will be outside Belgrade theater and in a car park because they want to make it look like a rock performance video. casual clothes for the music video. there is message or moral behind the video its just a performance video. 

Overall i think its a good idea and the song suits the video. i think it's a good idea and they presentation was good.

bahm group
i like the fact that they are using a unique music for their video. i also like the use of blue but instead of using it on a boy it used on a girls emotions. good storyline

zacks group
planning is not  good. they also need to improve their inspiration and also they didn't make it clear what the narrative part of the video was.

todays's plans

today we are going to make a presentation and present it to the class.

todays plans

today we are making a story while haris u and maunashe are going to taking pictures of the loaction we are going to using for our video and me and haris z are making a story board.

time line

Beautiful Lasers
the text in red, Munashe is singing
the text in orange, Haris U s singing



There's only two ways out of here
You wait too late you'll be trapped here forever
There's only two ways out of here
One's through the door
The other's through me

[Verse 1]
Sometimes livin in a world like this
It's pretty hard not to go insane
Not pretty if you don't comply
Pretty easy if you don't complain
Stand there like you don't feel pain
No tears in the face of defeat
Pretend to the end that you don't fear change
Don't admit that your faith is weak
Don't say that you feel like dyin
Life's hard and it feels like diamonds
Goin home's just far too gone much too late to even feel like tryin
Can't understand what I'm sayin?
Can't figure out what I'm implying?
If you feel you don't wanna be alive,
You feel just how I am
I'm on the dark side and you can't come find him
Hell when it's light all around you yeah
When it's dark all inside him
No winners when it's me against me
One of us aint gone survive
My heart been broke for a while
Yours been the one keepin me alive

There's only two ways out of here
You wait too late you'll be trapped here forever
There's only two ways out of here
One's through the door
The other's through me
[ Lyrics from: http://www.lyricsty.com/lupe-fiasco-beautiful-lasers-lyrics.html ]
[Verse 2]
This world's such a fucked up place
My mind such a fucked up shape
Everything down here sucks
Maybe what's up there is great
We all gotta go one day
I just wanna cut to the chase
I wanna stop these nightmares
I just wanna touch your face
All you see is all my feats
All I see is all my flaws
All I hear is all my demons,
Even through your applause
All you see is all my flights
All I see is all my falls
All you see is all my rights
All I see is all my wrongs
Door keep tellin me to fight
Gun on the table tellin me to come on,
Tellin me to put him inside my hand,
Then put him up right next to my dome
Door keep tellin me to find a reason,
Anything to keep me from squeezin,
Simplest things, yeah you really like summer,
You really like music, you really like readin
Love, I can't win if it's me against me
One of us ain't gone survive
My heart been broke for a while yours been the one keepin me alive
Yours been the one keepin me alive
Yours been the one keepin me alive!

There's only two ways out of here
You wait too late you'll be trapped here forever
There's only two ways out of here
One's through the door
The other's through me
The other's through me
The other's through me
The other's through me
The other's through me

today's plans

today we are going to decide on the narrative in the music video and also what it should be about. then we are going to be doing a story board.
the camera shots that we are going to be using are:
close up shot
over shoulder shot
medium shot
long shot
and many other shots.
the roles in the team are Haris z and myself  and going be behind the camera but also we are going to be doing the narrtive part in the video. Haris U is going to be rapping the song and Munashe and dancing to the song. the song that we chose is called Beautiful Lasers by Lupe Fiasco. the rapping is going to on the top of stringer and the dancing is going to be in the theater and the narrative we are still thinking about where to film it.                                                      

today i finished the mood board. Also instead of starting the story board we are going to writing about mi-son-sen because we cant think on how to start the story board yet. at the end of the lesson we talked about doing the mi-son-sen next lesson and try to do the story board.

my mood board

plans for today

today we are to make a mood board on the software called Photoshop. after we finished the mood board then we will try to start the story board.

change of plans

Haris u and Munashe decided to change the song song because the song freeze had a music video so changed it back to beautiful lasers and we are hoping not to change it again.

location and risk of assessment

.Today we are carrying on with our music videos we are going to write about the risk factors of the two location which are the in the theater and the other location is on top of Sidney Stringer. The risk assessment of when we are filming on top of the school are going to be we need to make sure that no one falls of the building so we need good communication.

we also decided to change the song first we chose the song called beautiful lasers but then Munashe couldn't dance properly because it was hard to dance to the beat so we changed it to Chris brown freeze. the risk assessment of the theater no smoking, also their is health and safety rules so you need to be careful with the wires and lights. we are also planning the story board and the mood board. Also we are planning on what costumes we are going to be wearing depending on what type of music it is.                       

Music video

Our video is going to be a performance video with munashe being the person and haris u rapping. Munashe is going to be dancing. the music is called Beautiful lasers by Lupe Fiasco. the location is going to in the theater this is because their are good facilities their for example lighting. Also we thought that we should have a bit narrative in the video so we are going to have me and hairs z fighting. Also we are setting the dance bit of the video in the theater and the singing bit is going to be on top of stringer we also might use the green screen to make the video look better but we aren't sure if the school has a green screen.  So overall we decided that Munashe is going to dancing, hairs u singing and kashif and hairs z going to doing the camera work, designs and the narrative acting.